Several things: First off, I generally only upload games with a 10+ KD or so, but I guess that is up to you. Regarding your commentary, it is a very bad thing to talk about a lack of things to talk about. This isn't being streamed live on TV; you have as long as you want to think over what you feel like discussing, and don't have to record the voiceover in one straight shot. Over planning can sound a bit scripted, but it is better than a lack of enthusiasm. It may sound silly, but I actually practice while driving, it is helpful. Also, you did a pretty good job at varying your commentary, but remember to try to avoid play-by-play. Anyway, good job for your first time.