Post: What You Think of My Rap?
03-31-2011, 09:37 PM #1
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well just to tell you in order for it to sound good you have to read it at a fast pace & read it like if it was a rap =D
I'm 16 & get my inspiration from 80s & 90s hip hop & underground.
Here's some bars I wrote yesterday, what you guys think?

Just sit back, relax & listen how I react on the track..

I be eatin niggas up like jaws
Followed you home, kicked down your door
Run up on that ass, put ur brain on the floor
Think about it before you step to me G
Watch yourself when you walk through my street
You'll get beat or feel the led from my heat, simply defeat.
Rush to high, don't try to enter my mental state, you'll break
with any fat rhymes that you make
A smooth groove that gives you contraction, back with a Mac 10, prepare for action..
I represent, the hostile & wild, a funky child my style flow like the Nile
My mic is burnin, back up don't touch ya
I'll crush ya, like the breakdown of Russia
Don't test, the lyrical style I possess, protect your chest from the best with the best, im flawless because many brothas make a mess, it's the stress that got me buckin like the rest.

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03-31-2011, 09:39 PM #2
Yo carlito put this shit into vocals and post it then get a track comon ma nigga chase the dragon
03-31-2011, 09:40 PM #3
My Hate
At least I can fight
I like turtles.
03-31-2011, 09:43 PM #4
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Originally posted by KennethKaniff View Post
Yo carlito put this shit into vocals and post it then get a track comon ma nigga chase the dragon


Lol chase the dragon? Don't know what you talkin about lol but na I don't wanna record **** that :p
03-31-2011, 09:44 PM #5
Originally posted by carface View Post
Lol chase the dragon? Don't know what you talkin about lol but na I don't wanna record **** that :p


Dont be a pussy opinions meen shit, if anyone hates on you ignore them theyre trolls
03-31-2011, 09:47 PM #6
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Originally posted by KennethKaniff View Post
Dont be a pussy opinions meen shit, if anyone hates on you ignore them theyre trolls


Na nigga I ain't pussy I just don't wanna record, I don't want the fame look at my sig & look @ what Nas said :y:
03-31-2011, 09:48 PM #7
Originally posted by carface View Post
Na nigga I ain't pussy I just don't wanna record, I don't want the fame look at my sig & look @ what Nas said :y:


Whimp :P Then just send me in privatly i wanna hear dis
03-31-2011, 09:53 PM #8
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Originally posted by KennethKaniff View Post
Whimp :P Then just send me in privatly i wanna hear dis


Not worth the record it's too short, just read it at a kind of fast pace. I got other things I wrote too but I gotta copyright it before niggas start swagga-jackin my shit Cool Man (aka Tustin)
03-31-2011, 09:54 PM #9
Originally posted by carface View Post
Not worth the record it's too short, just read it at a kind of fast pace. I got other things I wrote too but I gotta copyright it before niggas start swagga-jackin my shit Cool Man (aka Tustin)


LOL swagga jackin lol thats funny
03-31-2011, 10:08 PM #10
--Ben-
I SPEAK MY MIND!
You actually should record this bro, would sound pretty good Cool Man (aka Tustin)

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