Originally posted by Irish
You sir are a wannabe "Grammer Nazi" who is only doing this to be apart of a group. You have very bad grammer.
"Spelling Error." The capital letter should only be infront of spelling.
"sorry im a grammer nazi :p xD." should be "Sorry I'm a "Grammer Nazi" :p xD."
Should actually be "Sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi"

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Back on topic though, the tutorial and outcome are both good, but you might want to do a voice over so people know what you're doing, and also get a better screen cap program (Camtasia and HyperCam are both good).