Try incorporating more c4d/fractal elements. he only thing it really lacks is effects, seems unfinished. Also, try some smudging. It's very nice looking and clean cut, just a little bit undeveloped.
I'm not sure about some smudging.
The sig is fine somewhat, but it could use a little more effect to it.
The text near the hood is a little hard to read and doesn't fit, but great job.
Offtopic: @Rambodian I see your Cambodian? So am I.
Your also in Fresno huh? I was suppose to go there tomorrow for the week.