First Time Manga/Line Coloring

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I also re-translated it; the original translation was a bit off. Reads from right to left.

CnC? This is my first time doing this coloring in business.

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in the gray area at the top some of the 'brush' strokes are really obvious
i guess its pretty good
i wouldn't really count this as line art

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in the gray area at the top some of the 'brush' strokes are really obvious
i guess its pretty good
i wouldn't really count this as line art

Really? I must be the combination of the fact that I have a crappy monitor, and that it's at a weird angle. I can't see them at all. If I saw them, it would be an easy fix.

And I wasn't really sure wht to call it since i don't know the terminology for everything