Originally posted by M.Mac
How would I define the effects more?
It's hard to really explain this, so let me use an example to maybe help clarify the issue:
A director wants to show a fight scene in a movie, but wants to increase the tension more than just using just his actors against a background. There are so many ways to intensify the action you see, some better or worse than others.
Now imagine a director decides to use multiple different effects to enhance his scene. Of course there are combinations that look good together, and others bad. Unfortunately, sometimes a director has really amazingly done visual effects to enhance his scene, but adds in shaky cam and quick cuts from shot to shot; while each individual type of effect looks great on its own, combined they get muddied and the entire scene looks worse for it.
Your tag is like the director's action scene. There are undoubtedly good-looking effects in there, that individually would add a great accent to the scene, but together they've been muddied and just look (no offense of course) very chaotic and bleh. Now I can't tell you which effect(s) to remove for the best tag, but I would suggest cleaning it up, my personal go-to when I have a tag that's overloaded.
It's not for anyone else to really tell you where to go from here. The jump is going to be your figuring out what you can do to make the tag better. And when you do it once, you'll do it again and again and your art will improve exponentially.