pretty good for a first intro, although im not sure what happened at the end where the camera jerked abit and showed us some smashed text, didnt look that good imo but I liked the lighting on the text before the bullet shattered it
if you can make the colours go better (didnt like the colour scheme) and make it smoother it could look really good
You gotta add audio to sync with the intro or it just kills the intro no matter what. Even the TMV (The Movie Vault) intro would be shit w/o audio to go with it. Its pretty good for your first I guess, but as said above I didn't really like the colors. Keep trying though!