Hey guys, ive been in alot of machinimas with YouTube - xKappYx28's Channel .
Don't know if you have ever seen them. But recently i made my FIRST machinima. So Please check it out, tell me what you think. And to anyone whosays it doesnt have a story line, like i say to everyone else, its the FIRST episode. DEAL WITH IT

Here is my suggestion to you my friend.
Machinima is a tricky business, before you even consider filming and action machinima look at other great machinimas.


Watch how the angles are changed and the camera moves at a steady pace, never jerking around.
Story lines can still be told without words, you can still tell what is going on with this video.
Always have a story or else the viewer doesn't know what to expect or look for, because the viewer wants to make conclusions and guess what is going to happen.

I am not sure if you were going for the cloverfield camera, but don't just follow the same guy around, keep the angles interesting and fresh.
Filming takes A LOT of time. You need to be patient.
Filming something like that and doing it right, would take 8-9 hours.

Good luck man! You need to learn and gather knowledge from others!
Ryan

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well i thought the attack was pretty good i liked it =p
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still, that's a good video for a first one bro good job

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wow This is tight Nice Find.

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Vid is is great for the first, awesome job